Unless you are one of the few people on earth who can effectively do the job I’m recruiting for… don’t ever send me a cover letter like this:
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Good Morning,
My name is [Naive Entry-Level Candidate] and I’d like to submit my resume in consideration for the Marketing Manager Position. I’ve worked at a marketing firm during the last 2 years and I’m well acclimated with the space, vendors, partners, and marketing channels. Â I’m looking for:
- 12k a month Salary
- Half months salary upon signing my contract
- Full Benefits, Healthcare, Dental
- 10% Commission for every new client signed that I bring in…
- 10 business days of Vacation
- Work from home 2 days a month
- Expense account – This is to entertain clients, prospects, and for travel
- After hitting $300,000 in revenue: a company credit card for expenses
Please find my contact information below. Â I am available to speak/meet with you immediately.
Best Regards,
[Naive Entry-Level Candidate]
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Was it his lengthy two years of experience or his modest salary requirements that caught my attention? Â Your call. Â PS – “Position” isn’t capitalized.
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